Animal writting

One hot sunny day I was walking to my friend Nick's house and when we were about three quarters of the way there we spot this strange looking animal in between two trees. It had four horns on his body. There was one on its head, two on its knees, a a good 4 hours and then I had to go home. But when I got home that animal was sitting at the door staring at me with big red  bloodshot eyes and gave me the chills. I walked inside and ate diner which was amazingly yum but when I went into my bedroom… The creature was in my bed staring at me A massive  chill ran down my spine.

I slowly crept out of my bedroom to get my mum to tell her that there is a creature in my room I here scuttling on the floor. “Come on let’s go!” I shouted but when we got there the creature was gone. My mum said that it was probably my mind playing tricks with me, I thought so too. I escorted myself to my bedroom jumped on top of my blankets and woke up in the middle of the night because I heard weird noises. Slowly I open my eyes and standing on me was that creature with a cheeky looking grin on its mouth I screamed!!! All of The living life out of me.It had this weird  pointy thing straped to its arm and then it stabbed me in the arm. I woke the next morning feeling a little weird…

I glared around and everything looks bigger I look at the mirror and scream. I am a mouse don don don I try to get of my bed but it is a big drop. Well I guess I have  nothing to live for I jumped of(off) my bed and hit the ground I heard a whooshing sound and then I start to ( oh I haven't hit the ground yet) swirl  and then I am  back in my bed.  After dinner I look out the window and there was the creature I tell my mum I just have to get some fresh air so I go outside and get my dads shotgun I load it and point at the creature I pull the trigger bam!!! the creature was finally dead.   

I am proud of my writing because it has some really descriptive words and more punctuation then any of my other writing. I really tried hard to use my full stops because sometimes I write really really long sentences and forget my full stops. I have used speech marks when someone is talking. I need to put a comma after the end speech mark.

Something that I need to work on is in my writing I need to put in paragraphs. I needed to have feedback and a bit of teacher help for this.

 

 

Camp Reflection

Me and my friends enjoying our burgers.

Arapata and Ben M making a bamboo hut.

People exploring Camp Omatua .

Something that challenged me was doing the fear factor food challenge because Mrs Hill made seem like it was something that tasted yuck  but most of the time it was yum . Something I enjoyed was going down the water slide because when you got soaped you went really fast and its fun getting to the end because you got all muddy and you got a lolly pop when your body got to the end of the water slide. My biggest achievement would probably be going to sleep at camp Weka because everyone was loud as could be but I did it which is a relief. My best highlight form camp has to playing in the bamboo forest because it was fun to explore around all the bamboo and go in the really coll huts some people made. The worst thing about camp was probably all the rain that came with us to camp  because it stopped us doing some of our activities we were going to do but we still had a great time.

Trap door

The Trapdoor

Ring ring ring ring I pushed the rusty old doorbell on my aunt's wide  dusty old front double door.She lives in a huge 6 storie old creepy mansion in death valley America I was with her for 2 weeks because my mum and dad were out in hollywood going to a red carpet marathon.

Any way I walked into my aunt’s mansion She came walking down the stairs to the front door and said

hello Ben  would you Like me to take  your bags to your

room  Ben, Yes  please I said. Oh and Your Bedroom is

Upstairs 3rd room to the left. Ok  said  Ben. Strolling  Upstairs  into my room.   opening the door to  my room I walked in  and something caught My eye there was a Loose bit of Carpet at the end of the room. I  creeped over  to the end of the room to investigate I pulled the loose bit of carpet up and there was a bit of wood under there with a small bronze rusty  handle attached to it. I carefully opened  the trapdoor. Peering down into the deep dark casym. there was a slide going down the massive casym I said to myself should I go down the slide or should I  not ? Um I will go down it so I sped down the slide to the bottom of the trapdoor and there was a shining sword made out of diamonds. Picking the sword up it started to glow so then I swung it at a rock on the ground and it cut right through the middle, cool I said I walked forward some more and I could hear trees rustling in the distance and then I saw  a door and I opened the door and was astonished Kapiti island I walked through the door and I was in one of the Waikanai tunnels and I could hear   coming from the other side so I walked further into the tunnel and there was a tunnel on the side . Walking through the other tunnel I saw Ngahere and his cousin conrad and he said to me what are you doing here he said um I, let's just say I walked through a magical door and ended up here. That same thing happened to me Ngahere said. Man where did you get that sweet diamond sword Conrad said. I got it from my aunt's house but then something let out a humongous roar!!!, wha wha what was that Conrad said I don’t no I said I think I know what it is ngahere said What is it me and Conrad said said it’s the Taniwha of Waikanai beach said Ngahere . The what what what what what I said The Taniwha of Waikanai beach Ngahere repeated. What!!! I said a Taniwha here like right now. Yes said Ngahere wait a minute how do you know  it’s a Taniwha said Conrad, Um my dad told me a legend when I was 4 about a taniwha on Kapiti island it's just a guess  it might just be a magical lion or something since this is a magical place right said Ngahere, um yeah I said. anyway we need to get out of these tunnels before the thing gets in and eats us I said, Ngahere do you know the way out I said yes this way Ngahere said okay follow  Ngahere out and then we will try and kill it Conrad said with what I said  With that sweet diamond sword of your’s stupid said Ngahere oh yeah I said let's go I said  we ran for about ten minutes and then we found the exit we exited the tunnels and there was the the taniwha waiting for us… “What do we do I said” “don’t move it has the sight of a T-rex so it can only see sudden movements but  then conrad tripped over my foot and the taniwha ran at us and then I stabbed in the heart with my diamond sword and then I felt dizzy and then whoosh I was back in my bedroom at my aunt's house and there was the diamond sword sitting at the end of the bed.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                

my google form

I am learning to share information about me on google forms.
Something that challenged me was putting in all the different answers without giving the answer away.
Something  that also challenged me was putting in all the questions that people don't already know about me.

my presentation

Something that challenged me was finding all the right information that will explain to the reader what five nights at freddy's is

Calendar art

WALT present a piece of artwork for our parents to buy.

Success Criteria

• Take our time, show patience (GRIT)
• Plan our piece of artwork
• Take care with the painting and dyeing
• Research for our inspiration
• Explain the steps you took to make your artwork on your blog
• How do you feel about your artwork?  
• What was  a challenge?

How to make footprint art. (foot art)

Step 1 look for an inspiration for your footprint art.

Step 2 plan your artwork on A-3 piece of paper.

Step 3 create a background for your artwork.

Step 4 paint your foot and and put it on your background.

Step 5 draw all your details.

Step 6 enjoy your footprint art.

This is my calendar art, I chose the Hot stuff pepper footprint art. Here is a photo of the original Hot stuff footprint art.

This is the original Hot stuff footprint art I know that I didn't do as good as this one but I tried my

best.

These are the options for the Calendar art

1. A notepad
2. A Calendar
3. A  diary
4. Or a Pack of cards

                                         

It makes sense poem

WALT entertain the audience

Success Criteria:

1. I plan for the writing task
2. I write sentences that make sense
3. I have colour, taste, smell, look, sound and feel each on a new line.
4. I use specific words in the poem.
5. I attempt to write words I don’t know by using my sound/letter knowledge or a dictionary.
6. I use commas, exclamation marks, capital letters and full stops correctly.
7. I will present my poem on an A4 paper from the tote tray.  I need to think about making sure the reader will be able read my writing.

                                                         Anger

                                                   Anger is hot red.

                                           It tastes like spicy red chillies..

                                          It smells like fire burning wood.

                                 Anger looks like bombs exploding on your face.

                                It feels like you are transforming into the hulk.                     

                               It sounds like lions roaring in your head.

                                                                         

                                               Anger stresses me out.